2014年12 月27日管理類聯(lián)考英語(二)真題作文解析

太奇 邵寧

　　考試結(jié)束了，希望大家能以平和的心態(tài)來面對考場上的得失。

　　Section IV Writing

　　Part A

　　47. Directions：

　　Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice to

　　1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and

　　2) call for volunteers.

　　You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET

　　Do not use your name or the name of your university.

　　Do not write your address. (10 points)

　　以下邵寧串講講義第48頁小作文預測：

　　1. 詢問信 Letters of Inquiry

　　2. 邀請信 Letters of Invitation

　　3. 投訴信 Letters of Complaint

　　4. 感謝信 Letters of Thanks

　　5. 建議信 Letters of Suggestion

　　6. 推薦信 Letters of Recommendation

　　7. 道歉信 Letters of Apology

　　8. 申請信 Letters of Application

　　9. 辭職信 Letters of Resignation

　　10. 謝絕信 Letters of Declining

　　11. 求職信 Letters of Application for Employment

　　12. 通知/ 啟示 Notice / Bulletin

　　13. 備忘錄 MEMO

　　備注：其中四個紅色模式為邵寧密訓中特意強調(diào)之重點，通知為書信外唯一補充題選。齊轍所出B3模考題正是相關(guān)通知模擬題。所以在?？即v中皆有照顧。

　　以下是邵寧在保過班以及最后密訓班上所講之通知模板供大家參考：

　　Notice

　 　In purpose of improving the level of English, we are going to organize an English lecture Contest in the auditorium of the scientific building from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. on Monday, July 11th.

　?、賂here are several requirements for the applicants. ② Firstly, candidates should have a strong interest in English learning, especially in oral English. ③ Secondly, priority and preference will be given to those who have a good command of both spoken and written English. Finally,……

　　 ①There are a lot of awesome prizes waiting for you to take them home. ② Anyone who is interested in the contest is welcomed warmly. ③ What you need to do is to contact us at shaoning1229@sina.com, or to call us at 6253086. ④ Thank you very much for your attention.

　　The Students’ Union

　　以下是真題小作文參考范文(紅顏色標注部分為完全照抄部分)：

　　Notice

　　In purpose of enriching the life of our high school students, we are going to organize a summer camp for them in the Forest Park on Sunday, July 11th. Many wonderful activities are arranged during the period of activity. And we are now recruiting volunteers to assist in organization and reception.

　　①There are several requirements for the applicants. ② Firstly, candidates should have a strong interest in camp activities. ③ Secondly, priority and preference will be given to those who have relevant experience of organization. ④ Finally, friendliness and hospitality should be shown by every volunteer during the work.

　　① Anyone who is interested in the activity is welcomed warmly. ② What you need to do is to contact us at shaoning1229@sina.com, or to call us at 6253086. ③ Thank you very much for your attention.

　　The Students’ Union[page]

　　Part B

　　48. Directions:

　　Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

　　1) interpret the chart, and

　　2) give your comments.

　　You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

　　以下邵寧串講講義第63頁大作文預測：

　　真題和邵寧串講時所預測之大作文方向高度一致。

　　千人串講課堂上預測話題(社會生活類)：

　　1. consumption concept(消費觀念)

　　2. international tourism

　　3. gender equality

　　以下邵寧串講講義第63頁大作文熱門話題預測：

　　6. Key Words : Consumption Concept (消費觀念)

　　1. The diversity of modern consumption ways stimulates the dramatic transformation of traditional concepts.

　 　2. The rapid improvement of economic conditions provides consumers with more opportunities to enhance the quality of their daily life.

　　3. Due to the great influence of globalization, more and more people begin to pursue new and personalized consumption ways.

　　以下邵寧串講講義第61頁大作文模板一(現(xiàn)象原因型)：

　 　As we can see from the diagram, great changes that have taken place in the sphere draw our attention. According to the graph, (…description…). The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.

　　Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, with the rapid pace of modern society, there is an increasing demand for various modern ways of communication. Based upon a survey performed by socialists, almost 65% of the respondents regard X as their top priority, compared to 46% only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid development of relevant industries promotes the emergence of X. Last but not the least, as the result of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards X, and regard it as a lifestyle.

　　Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to produce a profound influence on relevant spheres.

　　將熱門話題預測句型帶入大作文模板后可寫成真題作文：

　　As we can see from the diagram, remarkable tendency that has occurred in the sphere draw our attention. The pie chart shows the percentage of residents’ consumption in a city during the Spring Festival holidays. The spending on new year’s gifts ranks first, accounting for 40% of the total. The expenses on dinner parties and traffic make up 20% respectively. (The phenomenon is so thought-provoking that I can’t help exploring the driving forces behind it.)

　 　Many factors that contribute to the phenomenon may be summarized as follows. Above all, the diversity of modern consumption ways stimulates the dramatic transformation of traditional concepts. Based upon a survey performed by socialists, almost 52% of the respondents regard buying new year’s gifts as their preferable way to celebrate their festivals, compared to 36% only a few years ago. What’s more, the rapid improvement of economic conditions provides us with more opportunities to hold dinner parties at restaurants. Last but not the least, as the influence of globalization, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude towards the transportation costs during holidays.

　 　Based on the factors discussed above, all the analysis points to an unshakable conclusion. The trend does not exist in this single field, and it is bound to produce a profound influence on relevant spheres.

　　無論如何考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束，希望大家調(diào)整心情，度過愉快假期?。ㄌ嬗⒄Z教研組）